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DR WONG  
 
DR WONG  
 
I'm not paying for your unfiltered irrelevant Dead World thoughts on my life’s work!  
 
I'm not paying for your unfiltered irrelevant Dead World thoughts on my life’s work!  
   
   
 
   
 
CHALICE sees this ugliness. DR WONG sees her see, quickly shifts and mutes the glass with a gesture. She looks away.  
 
CHALICE sees this ugliness. DR WONG sees her see, quickly shifts and mutes the glass with a gesture. She looks away.  
      
DR WONG (CONT'D)  
 
DR WONG (CONT'D)  
 
Hey - I got orbital silk neoprotein for my supergirl.  
 
Hey - I got orbital silk neoprotein for my supergirl.  
      
CHALICE  
 
CHALICE  
 
Thanks dad.
 
Thanks dad.
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Then: DR WONG holds his ear, a voice beams into his head.  
 
Then: DR WONG holds his ear, a voice beams into his head.  
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FLIP TO WV:  
 
FLIP TO WV:  
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INT. WAVYVERSE. CHALICE’S CONFLUX.
430 INT. WAVYVERSE. CHALICE’S CONFLUX. 430
      
CHALICE flips back. She focuses, the sky color stabilizes.  
 
CHALICE flips back. She focuses, the sky color stabilizes.  
    
CHALICE  
 
CHALICE  
 
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I want to preview Renaming Yourself. Can’t you just do the Math one for me?  
I want to preview Renaming 1 Yourself. Can’t you just do the  
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Math one for me?  
      
BOB  
 
BOB  
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CHALICE (CONT'D)  
 
CHALICE (CONT'D)  
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Cyber Wong.
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The stream speeds up violently, eating up its banks.
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Cyber Wong. The stream speeds up violently, eating up its banks.
   
CHALICE (CONT'D)  
 
CHALICE (CONT'D)  
   
Susan. The stream looks cheerful then suddenly bends and dries up.  
 
Susan. The stream looks cheerful then suddenly bends and dries up.  
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BOB  
 
BOB  
It’s a subplot to your prime path. 10 Naming is rather advanced. <Beat>  
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It’s a subplot to your prime path. 10 Naming is rather advanced. <Beat> Father is having a very bad day. Did you know Frac-Tonal music can rewire muscle memory?  
Father is having a very bad day. Did you know Frac-Tonal music can  
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rewire muscle memory?  
      
BOB cues up the Frac-Tonal Music Module. Her path again resembles forking rivers leading to the familiar ridge.  
 
BOB cues up the Frac-Tonal Music Module. Her path again resembles forking rivers leading to the familiar ridge.  
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FLIP TO IRL:  
 
FLIP TO IRL:  
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440 INT. ZIM SHUTTLE. IN REAL LIFE. 440
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INT. ZIM SHUTTLE. IN REAL LIFE.  
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CHALICE finds herself seated beside DR WONG in a ZIM SHORE SHUTTLE, zipping fast somewhere. He’s pale and trembling.  
 
CHALICE finds herself seated beside DR WONG in a ZIM SHORE SHUTTLE, zipping fast somewhere. He’s pale and trembling.  
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DR WONG  
 
DR WONG  
What? No. What’re you talking about? Z - he’s trying to pin  
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What? No. What’re you talking about? Z - he’s trying to pin something on me -  
something on me -  
      
CHALICE  
 
CHALICE  
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DR WONG  
 
DR WONG  
Chalice. Listen. <Long pause> ZIM’s called us in. Chairman Ava herself  
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Chalice. Listen. <Long pause> ZIM’s called us in. Chairman Ava herself is requesting that you - break contract with BOB.  
is requesting that you - break  
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contract with BOB.  
      
CHALICE  
 
CHALICE  
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DR WONG  
 
DR WONG  
Terminate BOB. <Beat> They’re scared. But don’t worry. Wongs  
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Terminate BOB. <Beat> They’re scared. But don’t worry. Wongs don’t blink. Now listen -  
don’t blink. Now listen -  
      
FLIP TO WV:  
 
FLIP TO WV:  
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450 INT. WAVYVERSE. CHALICE’S CONFLUX. 450
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INT. WAVYVERSE. CHALICE’S CONFLUX.
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CHALICE observes a nearby section of landscape that is doubled, different from each other. Sky flickers erratically.  
 
CHALICE observes a nearby section of landscape that is doubled, different from each other. Sky flickers erratically.  
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Renaming is a full year’s course. Let’s continue path planning.  
 
Renaming is a full year’s course. Let’s continue path planning.  
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BOB continues moving forward, but CHALICE hangs. CHALICE  
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BOB continues moving forward, but CHALICE hangs.  
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CHALICE  
 
What would it look like if we break contract?  
 
What would it look like if we break contract?  
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BOB (CONT'D)  
 
BOB (CONT'D)  
I see. <Beat> I should complete the math module and reconcile our life  
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I see. <Beat> I should complete the math module and reconcile our life logs. I could factor in a year of therapeutics or a new sport  
logs. I could factor in a year of  
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therapeutics or a new sport  
      
CHALICE  
 
CHALICE  

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