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| | Terror in her face. Z holds his own jewel. It conjures a dozen of his own BOB contracts. He gestures, breaking a couple of them arbitrarily. His lip twitches. He makes a “no big deal” face. | | Terror in her face. Z holds his own jewel. It conjures a dozen of his own BOB contracts. He gestures, breaking a couple of them arbitrarily. His lip twitches. He makes a “no big deal” face. |
| | She holds her jewel. Her BOB CONTRACT zips out and orbits the fractured portal. | | She holds her jewel. Her BOB CONTRACT zips out and orbits the fractured portal. |
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| | CHALICE | | CHALICE |
| − | 3 Terminate Contract! 3
| + | Terminate Contract! |
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| | The BOB CONTRACT shifts into a blinking state. A “confirm?” glyph hovers over it. She glances at Z. He gives a poker face blank look. She looks back at her BOB CONTRACT. She trembles, nervous. Her eyes dart, delaying. Then finally: | | The BOB CONTRACT shifts into a blinking state. A “confirm?” glyph hovers over it. She glances at Z. He gives a poker face blank look. She looks back at her BOB CONTRACT. She trembles, nervous. Her eyes dart, delaying. Then finally: |
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| | CHALICE (CONT'D) | | CHALICE (CONT'D) |
| − | 4 Why didn’t anyone come for me?! 4
| + | Why didn’t anyone come for me?! |
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| | Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 24. | | Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 24. |
| − | Blue Rev. (mm/dd/yy) 24.
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| | Z | | Z |
| − | 5 Yea. Thought you should see for 5 yourself.
| + | Yea. Thought you should see for yourself. |
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| | She gives a confused look, then softens. She looks at Z’s conflux portal emanating from his jewel. | | She gives a confused look, then softens. She looks at Z’s conflux portal emanating from his jewel. |
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| | Z (CONT'D) | | Z (CONT'D) |
| − | 6 They’re finally launching this 6 cursed thing tomorrow. Bleh. Guess
| + | They’re finally launching this cursed thing tomorrow. Bleh. Guess I’m the only one who wants to hear what you think. |
| − | I’m the only one who wants to hear | + | |
| − | what you think. | |
| | She gestures her BOB CONTRACT back into her jewel. She glares at Z. He smiles, begins to make a quip. She zips into Z’s jewel. | | She gestures her BOB CONTRACT back into her jewel. She glares at Z. He smiles, begins to make a quip. She zips into Z’s jewel. |
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| | Z (CONT'D) | | Z (CONT'D) |
| − | 7 Just do us both a favor: tell them - 7 “I know what you did, and I forgive you.”
| + | Just do us both a favor: tell them - “I know what you did, and I forgive you.” |
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| | FLIP TO IRL: | | FLIP TO IRL: |
| − | 1000 EXT. ZIM SHORE COMPOUND SLOPE GARDEN, FUTURE — AFTERNOON 1000
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| | + | EXT. ZIM SHORE COMPOUND SLOPE GARDEN, FUTURE — AFTERNOON |
| | Z(C) and RAPTOR nearing an event. Shuttles parked. A dozen people gathered. Many more orb cams hover. An event screen displays “DOUBLE DESTINY (presented by ZIM)” in an expressive design. A small banner adjacent to the screen: 2:24 I’M YOURS. A wall of floating flower arrangements occludes the banner. It’s a wedding. At the center: ORLANDO in androgynous ornate attire, at ease. Leaning into ORLANDO’s ear, awkward: ALAN in a tuxedo, proper, but fists clenched. No one notices Z(C). | | Z(C) and RAPTOR nearing an event. Shuttles parked. A dozen people gathered. Many more orb cams hover. An event screen displays “DOUBLE DESTINY (presented by ZIM)” in an expressive design. A small banner adjacent to the screen: 2:24 I’M YOURS. A wall of floating flower arrangements occludes the banner. It’s a wedding. At the center: ORLANDO in androgynous ornate attire, at ease. Leaning into ORLANDO’s ear, awkward: ALAN in a tuxedo, proper, but fists clenched. No one notices Z(C). |
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| | ALAN | | ALAN |
| − | 1 <Whispers> 2:24. That’s our number. 1
| + | <Whispers> 2:24. That’s our number. |
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| | ORLANDO | | ORLANDO |
| − | 2 She knows. I know. But this is our 2 Double Destiny Wedding. Do you want
| + | She knows. I know. But this is our 2 Double Destiny Wedding. Do you want to maybe find your place? |
| − | to maybe find your place? | + | |
| | Z(C) spots AVA, older, yet exactly the same. Then: a familiar figure, with an exoskeletal brace: DR WONG. She trembles. They both calmly pull ALAN back a step. | | Z(C) spots AVA, older, yet exactly the same. Then: a familiar figure, with an exoskeletal brace: DR WONG. She trembles. They both calmly pull ALAN back a step. |
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| | CHAIRMAN AVA | | CHAIRMAN AVA |
| − | I don’t know what she | + | I don’t know what she promised you but today you are a guest of ZIM. |
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| | DR WONG | | DR WONG |
| − | Alan. You’re not a part of | + | Alan. You’re not a part of this story. |
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| − | this story. 4 4
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| − | promised you but today you
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| − | are a guest of ZIM.
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| | ORLANDO | | ORLANDO |
| − | 3 I’m ok, pop. We’re good. 3
| + | I’m ok, pop. We’re good. |
| − | 25.
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| − | 25.
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| | Then: the floating flower wall parts. A figure steps forward. It’s the bride: TWENTY-YEAR-OLD C(B). Time stands still. Z(C) is transfixed by every detail: her hair parted to the side; her eyes intense and unshrouded; her posture athletic. RAPTOR lunges forward a step. Z(C) finding her shaky voice: | | Then: the floating flower wall parts. A figure steps forward. It’s the bride: TWENTY-YEAR-OLD C(B). Time stands still. Z(C) is transfixed by every detail: her hair parted to the side; her eyes intense and unshrouded; her posture athletic. RAPTOR lunges forward a step. Z(C) finding her shaky voice: |
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| | Z (DRONED BY CHALICE) | | Z (DRONED BY CHALICE) |
| − | 4 Ch - Chalice? 4
| + | Ch - Chalice? |
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| | Everyone turns to the ridiculous sight of Z on a raptor. ALAN and ORLANDO stunned. C(B) gives a curious look. | | Everyone turns to the ridiculous sight of Z on a raptor. ALAN and ORLANDO stunned. C(B) gives a curious look. |
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| | Z (V.O.) | | Z (V.O.) |
| − | 5 Tell them: “I know what you did - 5
| + | Tell them: “I know what you did - |
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| | Z (DRONED BY CHALICE) | | Z (DRONED BY CHALICE) |
| − | 6 I know what you did, and - 6
| + | I know what you did, and - |
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| | Then: *whack* ALAN punches Z(C) off the raptor; she lays disoriented on the ground. The crowd descends, a nightmare of familiar faces ten years twisted. The orb cams snap and flash. AVA waving off the cams. | | Then: *whack* ALAN punches Z(C) off the raptor; she lays disoriented on the ground. The crowd descends, a nightmare of familiar faces ten years twisted. The orb cams snap and flash. AVA waving off the cams. |
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| | CHAIRMAN AVA | | CHAIRMAN AVA |
| − | No don’t shoot this! This | + | No don’t shoot this! This isn’t part of the campaign - |
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| | ALAN | | ALAN |
| − | How dare you show your face | + | How dare you show your face here! |
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| | + | ORLANDO |
| | + | Get out! You fat snake! |
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| | + | WENDY |
| | + | Uncle Z where’s my money?! |
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| | + | Z(C) feels all the hate. She clocks C(B) watching, analyzing. |
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| − | 10 here! 10 isn’t part of the campaign -
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| − | Get out! You fat snake!WENDY
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| − | ORLANDO
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| − | 12 Uncle Z where’s my money?!12 Z(C) feels all the hate. She clocks C(B) watching, analyzing.
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| | Z (DRONED BY CHALICE) | | Z (DRONED BY CHALICE) |
| | BOB! What did you do to my life?! | | BOB! What did you do to my life?! |